does this design hurt your face?

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ladesignandcoding
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Re: does this design hurt your face?

Post by ladesignandcoding »

by looking at that that does make my face hurt ouch!! that is funny though :D
SabirAhmed
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Re: does this design hurt your face?

Post by SabirAhmed »

Another thing i personally feel - and i dont think anyones mentioned it yet (?) Try change the colour of the text a bit more. Its all white , try some blue on a few words maybe, etc.

Also, Try getting subheadings in between the paragraphs, or just some reason the distance certain paragraphs from each other - like include a link which is mentioned on a line on its own after the 2nd paragraph for example.

I think the background looks good, but stands out too much and impairs ur view of the text
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